TheBigProjekt
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Join date: Jun 2009
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#1
I guess it's more metalcore, but it has some post-hardcore influences in it.

I'll C4C, just post a link and I'll get back to is ASAP.


EDIT: I always forget to upload :C.
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Last edited by TheBigProjekt at Oct 16, 2010,
clanderson32
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Join date: Feb 2009
482 IQ
#2
Ill be critting as i go
-I really like the piano intro, and when the guitar comes in alot. Very Good.
-I like the breakdown kinda riff that follows it too,and the tapping riff too
-wasnt too fond of the next breakdown but its not because its bad just because it wasnt as good as the first one
-bars 45-52 are good, i like the chaotic nature of this part
-53-69 is alright just generic
-75-85 i really like the use of chords and piano here
-i also like the outro of piano sweeps

overall 8/10 it could be a little stronger in some places but still very good.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1368804
xbitmetal
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Join date: Aug 2009
289 IQ
#3
Piano intro was nice. Guitar fits it, but change seems to be pretty fast to second riff. 20- on is beautiful, but nothing really special. Your breakdown was not really the best one I've heared. I think personally that breakdown is not necessary in every core song. 45- riff is pretty good, but drums ruin the riff. Think of something else. 62- on song had new kinda powerfull riff, it was nice. 78- on the riff is pretty beautiful. Nice ending riff.