Peres.T.Peanut
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Join date: Oct 2008
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#1
So, this is my newest attempt at composing. Honestly I'm quite happy with what came out of this, but still needs to be re-written.

Cheers!

C4C
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oneblackened
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#2
I like the second riff, the intro is pretty meh. The acoustic part is pretty cool.

It all feels very abrupt, work on your transitions between parts and you might have something going. I like to use drum fills as transition parts. Also it seems like the entire thing is based on one chord progression.

Here's mine.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1409166
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Peres.T.Peanut
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#3
yea it did seem very jumpy to me, but just listened to it so many times that I must've gotten used to it. Also, what worried me the most was the change of mood between the sections. it just starts folky and goes somewhere else after. not sure its good or bad.
anyways, it has some parts that I really like so, at the very least, I'll scrap it.

Thanks dude! Going to see yours right away
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Peres.T.Peanut
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#5
wow the intro melody is the same :| really didn't meant for it.thanks for pointing that out. I do find it flattering that you're comparing the rest to Ensiferum though...
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Hey Im Looking For Some Tech Death Metal In D

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try anything form avenged sevenfold

I lol'ed.

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inb4 everyone else, well played
Last edited by Peres.T.Peanut at Feb 8, 2011,