Kirborg
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2004
267 IQ
#1
hey guys this is a very sad song I wrote about a family that lost one of their own as a result of a cruel battle
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4.Eulogy.gp5
Last edited by Kirborg at Feb 19, 2011,
Mean Mr Mustard
Naked By The Computer
Join date: Aug 2007
6,868 IQ
#2
I LOL'd.

Anyways, its a great theme, but I would add something else at bar 50 to make it a bit thicker or change it a bit, or alternatively you could change the modified theme, as it sounded pretty similar to the theme. Good job though, it made me weep.
Kirborg
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2004
267 IQ
#3
thank you for the crit, i will add a bit more variance to it.
Erra93
erriuyai
Join date: Nov 2009
1,682 IQ
#4
Hahahah, I laughed for a year when I heard the intro and then re-read your description of the song xD