synestershadows
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#1
I just started this about an hour ago. Let me know what you think and how I should continue.


I think I've been listening to too much It Prevails...
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melodic bullshit song blah poop v.2.gp5
melodic bullshit song blah poop v.3.gp5
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s1th1s
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#2
sounds pretty good to me .. Very good actually xd
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#3
I like this a lot, keep up the good work!
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#4
Badass dude! I wish I wrote that!
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#5
Yeah. Good Job man. Very ADTRish
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synestershadows
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#6
Quote by grizzli1994
Yeah. Good Job man. Very ADTRish

Say wha?

Anyway, I'm still editing this part. I'll upload a new version some time soon.

EDIT: New version up.
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Last edited by synestershadows at Feb 28, 2011,
synestershadows
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#8
Thanks man. I appreciate it!
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synestershadows
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#10
Thanks a lot man! I took some of your drum ideas. I like your fills.

New version up!
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HappyGilmore899
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#11
Not really my style usually but it is pretty damn good and catchy. The Rhythm and Big Lead Melody at bar 45 is great and something you can definitely build off of. Drums are simple but fit what you have so far. Keep it up, interested to hear it as it progresses.

C4C Would be appreciated on "Who's Listening" in my sig
synestershadows
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#12
New version up. And it is no longer just an intro.
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#13
Quote by synestershadows
New version up.


Where?
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synestershadows
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#14
First post.
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Well you're wrong and stupid and I don't like you.


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You know who's a good troll? Me. Because I'm secretly in love with Pandy.
Mean Mr Mustard
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#15
Hey its really nice. I loved the chorus section at bar 45. However, its a little weird when the clean part comes in. I would have the drums either come in at the beginning of that part, or have something like a reverse cymbal in bar 61 then a cymbal hit in bar 62 to introduce the clean section. And the clean section itself was really nice, I could imagine it would continue with a nice guitar solo overtop of it.
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#16
Really enjoyed it. Loved goatsock's additions!