Taco_Bastard
Taco Sales Engineer
Join date: Jan 2010
54 IQ
#1
A song a buddy and me made about a month ago. It's practically finished aside from an outro, but I've ran into a snag. I know this song needs something more, but I'm not really sure what or where I would add it. Some advice would be appreciated. Btw, this song was wrote with the intention of vocals over top of it, so keep that it mind.
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To Battle We Ride.gp5
brokenwizard
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2006
190 IQ
#2
Could do with a few more lead break perhaps, between chorus and verse for instance, maybe the harp was intended for this but the arpegios aren't as impressive as say a maiden-esque harmonised section, it just breaks things up a little, gives the vocalist a rest etc. Hope that helps.
Taco_Bastard
Taco Sales Engineer
Join date: Jan 2010
54 IQ
#3
Yeah, I can see some leads going there. We were focusing more on song structure that leads, which helped progress the song, but led to this problem. Appreciated.