Hey, guiz. This is the first original I've done in a while. My friend is letting me borrow his sweet $80 bass so I had to rock it... extra hard. Threw together some various generic metalcore riffage. Bang your head.

First song on my profile:

Vocals will be done by the weekend, hopefully! I'm also probably going to brighten the rhythms guitars up a bit.

Let me know what you think! C4C
I really like it man, keep it up. Sort of thing that i like. Like what you did with the drums too
Running through:

Engl Fireball
Engl Slanted Cab
Ibanez Xiphos
Schecter C-1 FR Black
Ibanez GRG (on its way)

Boss Noise Gate, Zakk Wylde Overdrive, Boss Tuner, Zakk Wylde Wah.
Very nice for a metalcore/deathcore song. Quite Miss May I-esque.

When the riff comes in at :34 (and again at like 1:37), the drums don't work at all. A snare on the downbeat just doesn't fit. I think either a snare on the upbeat or every count would work so much better. The snare is going off on the downbeat almost the whole song, so it's nice to give some more variety.

I must say, the production on this sounds really great. Whatever you're doing, keep it up with that. I'm learning more about production (and recording in general) myself.