#1
What Names Are Good For
after Jim Shepard

This is a name and a place I used to know well.
"You know, you're the only family I have left,"
then you, telling me who's still around,
counting weight lost blow by blow.

In the dead of winter the year ends
and all we can do is watch our hands
rummaging through an old drawer
for an old address book.

You see, this one says don't call back
these two now take shipments across the country
these ones deny ever leaving
they let us know what we are missing
they remind us when we forget.

We climb to the roof in our warmest clothes
I let you know how disappointed I am by the fog-
"You know, on a clear day
you can see Oklahoma City from here."
"Yeah? And then what do you got?"
Anatomy Anatomy
Whale Blue Review

Park that car
Drop that phone
Sleep on the floor
Dream about me
Last edited by jiminizzle at Mar 15, 2011,
#2
It sounds like you read two of my stories before writing this. It was eerie. Especially in the first and third paragraph. It was strangely similar, yet it still sounds good coming out of someone else.
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#3
Really, party dresses for girls? At a Guitar forum? How's that been workin' out for ya so far mate? What's wrong with some good ol' "naked chicks" or "make your dick larger" action??

The sad thing is you don't even use a bot, and since you're typing custom messages anyway you could easily have changed that hyperlink into "check out the lyrics I posted yesterday" or something like that. Nope? You're still going with the party dresses? I mean, wow...

And you posted it on the Songwriting & Lyrics forum for crying out loud, which (no offense Jiminizzle) is one of the least visited parts of the UG forum

Seriously tho, this is the worst attempt at spamming I have ever seen

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