#1
It's not much but just something I wrote when my girlfriend left me..

Tell me, what's your name?
Let's take it back to the start of winter,
So I, can apologize for everything that's about to happen,
So I, can tell you everyday, you're beautiful to me.
If it made it any better,
Would you come back to the start with me?
Would you come back to the start?

Tell me, what's your dream?
I want to help you make it reality,
So I, don't have to question
why your smile brings so much attention to you,
What's your pain?
Don't say a word, just let me hold onto you.
If it made it any better,
Would you come back to the start with me?

If it made it any better,
Would you come back to the start with me?
If it made us dream of forever,
Would you come back to the start with me?

If it made it any better,
Would you come back to the start with me?

Thanks guys.
#3
I like it. I don't see anything wrong with it to give suggestions about. Maybe add something to the bridge? Not necessary really, just trying to come up with something.