Hello mate. The playing on this is great- nothing better than seeing someone really thrash a guitar about! On the composition and playing side there is really very little to crit. Whilst I like the main riff that runs through most of the song I would be tempted to add in more variations. I love the stop start stuff around 2.30- excellent. There are a lot more variations towards the end which are excellent. All in all, seriously impressive, keep it up. I would say the video is not the most interesting but I've never tried to make a video so can't really criticise!

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1422919