#1
Hello S&L, it's been awhile. I don't post much, but I read pieces all the time. Anyway... this came to me when I heard the news of a former classmate's untimely death. Take it as you will.


she left him today
so tomorrow he will be
six feet underground
#2
In my opinion, there wasn't much to this. I don't mean to be insensitive to the situation, but this haiku provides no stunning imagery, no hidden meaning apart from what can be directly taken from it. It isn't bad, but there's nothing to me here that distinguishes it from a normal haiku.

Also, Kid Cudi is the man.