guys i need to know your opinions on my cover and what should i improve on and what parts do i have to improve on pls answer its ok if u comment bad as long as ure telling the truth anyways ive been playing for almost 2 years now and this is the hardest song i can do so far http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RMtGA8VYCdI here is the link and if u want to comment on the vid in youtube pls make it a good comment
you know what parts you need to improve, dont ask us. anything you know you are missing notes on you need to practice more

2 years is long enough to invest in better gear. get a guitar with a floyd rose if your going to do dive bombs and whatnot, you went out of tune after the first one.

decent cover, good for 2 years. keep practicing and youll be able to nail it soon.