#1
Hey, I wrote and recorded a 39 second song today. It might be turned into a full song someday. I know the bass is too loud in like 1 part, I didn't realise until after, OHWELL! This might just be used as an intro or something, so I'm not sure. Also, I can't program drums that well :P Anyways, C4C, and Thanks!

the song is on my profile
or
http://soundcloud.com/notourday/magikarp

EDIT: I've made the song into a nearly 2 minute song. I'm pretty pleased with it and it's what I was going for. I also changed the tone of the lead guitar.
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#2
Sounds cool, but the tone of the lead guitar is grating. >:/

And why name it after the most detestable and pathetic Pokemon ever?

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#4
This sounds like the sort of thing that could be extended as an intro, then go into some instrumental metal with vocals coming in later. Sounds cool, though, not much else to say given the length.

C4C: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1422425 (mine's a little longer than yours, though... )
#5
yeah, you can't hear much ofthe lead guitar cause of the tone. But all it did was A Bb octave of A, and Bb again, so it gave an eerie sound.

The name? i never have normal names for my songs, so at first I thought "WOBBUFFET!" then I just decided on Magikarp, its a good name, kay?kay

I might try to write a fullsong soon, andhave that as the intro. I wanted to write something like A Day To Remember , but i gaveup, anyway thanks, i'll try to complete it.

Dark Raven X and whoknows -do you both have something you want me to review?

Blue - ill get right on it 0:
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#6
Writing this as I listen, the guitar sound sounds huge from the start, really like the tone. Pretty cool Intro, the snaredrum sound really annoys me though, in my opinion you should never use Drumkit from hell without putting a sample over the snare. The lead at 1:16 could be just a tad louder. The eerie kind of melody thing you have going is perfect this way though, love it. The ending was really fitting as well.

Good song, sounds more like Team Rocket's Magikarp to me then a Magikarp though. Nothing to comment on the song writing, but the drum sound isn't superb, really dig your guitar tone though. Care to share how you got that sound?

Also here's my song if you want to crit it: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1424997
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ESP LTD M-200FM
Amp:
Engl Powerball
Misc:
Focusrite Scarlet 2i4
#7
Wow! Definitely not what I was expecting!

I love it, it all seems to fit together. I especially like the higher lead sections, they give it that kind of melodic feel. I do agree with pinguinpanic about your tone as well, it is very well suited to this style. Overall I really liked this, it would make a great song.

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1425504
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#8
Yeah, I don't really like the snare sound either, but im not sure on howto change it. It's all done on my brothers computer with his stuff, so I used some ofthe settings he has for the guitar. I'll upload screenshots of the 2 different settings I used for the guitars. I'll get right on all of yours now, thanks.
main guitar part settings -
http://i54.tinypic.com/fcmw76.jpg

lead guitar -
http://i52.tinypic.com/98wosh.jpg

not sure if those pictures help
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