The singing needs a little work. It sounds weak at times. I'm no expert at singing myself by I would suggest pushing from your diaphragm. Other then that the melody and lyrics were really good. Just keep practicing and you'll have yourself a really nice song. Good job man
Originally Posted by JAHellraiser
Go into Guitar Center and tell them you are willing to spend $3000 on as many Spider and MG half stacks as they can give you.