#3
Returning the crit.

Okay so some hot spots for me are
:25 "take the long way home" style cadence which I enjoy
1:06 Like the feeling/change kept me interested
1:20 sing it with me... why cant we be friends why cant we be friends (cool little influence)

I like the verse vocals you stay on key and interesting with melody/cadence changes, I would have worked on the cadence and phrasing of words a bit but every one has a different style.

The chorus vocals are cool I would have had alot more top end on them because I personally like really bright sounding harmony. You could for personal experiment try murdering them with EQ in different ways to figure out a thicker sound if thats what you are going for.

Just some notes of mine hope you can hear all of it and listen to none of it! haha
#4
Hey man great track. The singing was great. The only part I didn't really like was at 42 with the high voices it sounded a tiny tiny tiny bit off and I just wasn't a fan. Although I will say the second time it came around it was much better. So times the voice seems a little to low in the mix the drums sound fantastic. Great track man!

c4c?
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#5
great track! The mix sounds great,
and im no expert, but i'de add a bit treble to the guitar and volume up a bit.
when its distorted, just volume up a bit.
The singing is awesome, sounds very pro!
the song is well written, it isnt getting boring, and it keeps changes, and still sounds like a one piece.
this whole thing sounds pretty professional, well done!

c4c? http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_7856137