21Fretter
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Join date: Jul 2007
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#3
It would need to have pretty catchy vocals beacuse it is pretty simple and straight forward. Definitely works though and the structure flows imo . I liked the bridge and the little intermittent guitar licks you threw in there but most of the progressions are very standard but that hasn't stopped 99% of the big pop songs these days though so get a good singer and write a catchy melody and you're good to go :P
poipoi
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Join date: Apr 2007
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#5
Nice song, very catchy (especially the chorus).
The guitar parts thrown in now and then keep it from becoming really boring, but as stated twice before it'd still need some catchy singing (which there is plenty of these days) to really let it stand out from just being another song.
Transitions are very smooth, nothing abrupt, and the break is really good.
Overall, I'd say good composition, definitely something I wouldn't mind listening to on the radio, or to wake up

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