#2
Hey I gave your song a listen.

This song has potential, but it's not quite there yet. I like that you never went off tempo, which is always a good thing. The main guitar riff was a bit repetitive and somewhat uninspired. It simply did not have the grabbing power of a really good guitar riff. I think that if you lowered it an octave, cranked up the distortion, and really put your soul into banging out the notes, it would sound much better.

I like that you're mixing it up by changing the riffs and dynamics, but you're also running into the problem of your song sounding like 4 different songs cut and pasted together. The changes in the music should be distinct and interesting, but there should be an overall theme linking it all together. Practice a ton.

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1423905

Aeolian Invasion