#1
I'm writing a "expected to be" 14 minute song in the genre of power metal, progressive metal and I need an idea for lyrics. I don't like no cheese... so it's kinda hard for me to find a proper tale ...
#2
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I'm writing a "expected to be" 14 minute song in the genre of power metal, progressive metal and I need an idea for lyrics. I don't like no cheese... so it's kinda hard for me to find a proper tale ...

Dont limit yourself by saying it has to be this long. Just write what you can then see how long it ends up.


And what sort of thing do you consider cheesy?
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#3
write a metal song about the civil war. has that been done?
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#4
do a pink floyd, 30 seconds of vocals with 15 minutes of solos.
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#5
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Dont limit yourself by saying it has to be this long. Just write what you can then see how long it ends up.


And what sort of thing do you consider cheesy?



Well I said, expected, I'm trying to make it as cool and awesome and as long as possible. By cheesy, I mean, "IMA GONNA GO TO CAVE AND KILL THE FACKIN DRAAA-OOOAAAGOON"
#6
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Well I said, expected, I'm trying to make it as cool and awesome and as long as possible. By cheesy, I mean, "IMA GONNA GO TO CAVE AND KILL THE FACKIN DRAAA-OOOAAAGOON"


OH!

The dragons balls were blazin' as I stepped into his cave
and I sliced his ****in' cockles, with a long and shiny blade!
Twas I who ****ed the dragon!
****-a-lie, sing ****-a-lou
and if you chose to **** with me than I shall **** you too!
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#7
In 15 minutes, re-tell the LOTR.
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#8
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OH!

The dragons balls were blazin' as I stepped into his cave
and I sliced his ****in' cockles, with a long and shiny blade!
Twas I who ****ed the dragon!
****-a-lie, sing ****-a-lou
and if you chose to **** with me than I shall **** you too!



.... thanks?
#9
Quote by kurt_cobain9
OH!

The dragons balls were blazin' as I stepped into his cave
and I sliced his ****in' cockles, with a long and shiny blade!
Twas I who ****ed the dragon!
****-a-lie, sing ****-a-lou
and if you chose to **** with me than I shall **** you too!

Lyrical genius has been gifted unto this man.

You are hungry for the rock.
But to learn the ancient method,
Sacred doors you must unlock.
Escape your father's clutches,
And this oppressive neighborhood.
On a journey you must go,
To find the land of Hollywood!
In The City of Fallen Angels,
Where the ocean meets the sand,
You will form a strong alliance,
And the world's most awesome band!
To find your fame and fortune,
Through the valley you must walk.
You will face your inner demons.
Now go my son and rock!
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#10
Get a favourite story or movie and turn it into a song.

Deeeeper! We need to go Deeeeeper!
Into Dreeeeeeeeamland! Deeeeeeeeper!
So come on in
it ain't no sin
take off your skin
and dance around in your bones

#11
Write a 15 minute epic about a tree.
dirtbag ballet by the bins down the alley
as i walk through the chalet of the shadow of death
everything that you've come to expect


#12
I do like LOTR, but how the hell am I supposed to write about that without it bein' cheesy...
#15
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Write about a fox who befriends a man, who brings meat from dead women for it to feed on


I need something more epic....
#16
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I do like LOTR, but how the hell am I supposed to write about that without it bein' cheesy...


How the hell would you write a song about several books/films depicting two midgets walking to a ****ing volcano?
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#17
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I need something more epic....

The complete Star Wars saga in 15 minutes?
Or even better, the story of Odysseus in song form. 15 minutes of a guy killing his father, screwing his mother and then gouging his eyes out.
So come on in
it ain't no sin
take off your skin
and dance around in your bones

#18
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I need something more epic....


Go alot deeper into the story of how this man loves the fox (non-beastiality way) however one day the fox has gone and this man goes into a depression etc etc
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The complete Star Wars saga in 15 minutes?
Or even better, the story of Odysseus in song form. 15 minutes of a guy killing his father, screwing his mother and then gouging his eyes out.


I don't know Star wars much...

Odysseus sound fun, but I do not know the story
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I don't know Star wars much...


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#23
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I don't know Star wars much...

Odysseus sound fun, but I do not know the story

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#25
It's prog metal. Sing about stars for a minute, then fill in the rest with crazy guitar squeaks.
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Technically not about THE Civil War I spose, but still......


I was talking about THE civil war

and while I'm sure many will come running at me with Pitchforks and torches for saying this...

...I ****ing hate G'N'R with a passion. I had absolutely no idea that existed until now.
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#27
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It's prog metal. Sing about stars for a minute, then fill in the rest with crazy guitar squeaks.



Well it's actually "mild" prog metal. Only element of prog metal are constant changes of rhythm
#29
try making a unicorn metal
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#30
write the song about astronauts traveling in space, and there are technical problems, and they have to fix their ship, but then the ending is ambiguous and you don't know if they make it or not.
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#31
>i want something epic
>needs to more epic
>even more epic than that
>don't know it
>don't know it
>Too epic for my liking
>not epic enough
>the correct level of epic, but not the right subject matter
>i don't like star wars

this thread
#32
He DOESN´T know the Odysseus? LOL, be glad you don´t live in spain, you would never have passed 4th year of PRIMARY school.

What about the journey of a coin through out the ages, from it was coined to it ended up in a museum.

Or a single raindrob.
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#33
Make the story of Charlie Sheen's descent into insanity in song
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#34
Write it about your penis. If you don't feel that your wang is the right amount of epic, you are using it wrong.
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