#2
Quote by SuperSlonik
Good afternoon,
I finished recording new composition Firebird. No vocals yet, but music is pretty much done. Please comment and feel free to provide constructive criticism. If you want, i'll review yours in return

http://soundcloud.com/projectid/project-id-firebird-remixed

Software used:
Reaper
Guitar Rig 4
EZ Drums


I love this! That bass rhythm during the verses is beautiful... And I can feel the idea of a firebird soaring to the skies throughout the whole song. Great job, will be staring intently at this thread for those vocals
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#3
Quote by SuperSlonik
Good afternoon,
I finished recording new composition Firebird. No vocals yet, but music is pretty much done. Please comment and feel free to provide constructive criticism. If you want, i'll review yours in return

http://soundcloud.com/projectid/project-id-firebird-remixed

Software used:
Reaper
Guitar Rig 4
EZ Drums

very nice
good guitar tone, nice drums and bass
waiting for final mix with vocal
#5
Some cool atmosphere at the beginning love that.

Then I hear drum machine which I'm not a fan of you should really try and get some live drums in there eventually

Intro riff comes in and personally it reminds me way too much of soundgarden's - spoonman

Verse comes in where the drum machine feels a lot more "believable"

Atmospheric guitar is sounds good and the second harmonics guitar fits

Chorus kicks in with the distorted guitar back again pretty cool love the piano wish it was more present to really drive home a sweeter sound for a chorus.

2:10 could use more buildup

Overall the overall volume of the instruments is good I don't hear enough bass guitar and I think you could make the guitar in the verse a little more present.

C4C - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1424045
#6
Quote by jdalivetube
Some cool atmosphere at the beginning love that.

Then I hear drum machine which I'm not a fan of you should really try and get some live drums in there eventually

Intro riff comes in and personally it reminds me way too much of soundgarden's - spoonman

Verse comes in where the drum machine feels a lot more "believable"

Atmospheric guitar is sounds good and the second harmonics guitar fits

Chorus kicks in with the distorted guitar back again pretty cool love the piano wish it was more present to really drive home a sweeter sound for a chorus.

2:10 could use more buildup

Overall the overall volume of the instruments is good I don't hear enough bass guitar and I think you could make the guitar in the verse a little more present.

C4C - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1424045


Thanks man,
I wish I could use real drums, it will take me forever to set that up, that's why i had to go with VST. Weirdly, the last thing it reminds me of is Spoonman, but now that you mentioned, i kinda see what you mean there. There's no piano in the chorus (just accoustic guitar with a bit of overdrive and high pass), but i guess i'll have to make it more distinct.
Once i get my new monitors, i'll be reworking all compositions, cause honestly my headphones suck.
Thanks for feedback, much appreciated! I left a bit of mine feedback on your song in the thread!

Chaeers
#7
SuperSlonik,
Thanks for the reviews! "Firebird (Re-mixed)": wouldn't mind hearing some good vocals on this, but otherwise, the guitars, bass, and drums all sound quite good! Nice melodies! Nice guitar playing!
"Shadows Call": nice intro! At 1:45, reminds me of Rush (good). Once again, I like the guitars, bass, and drums. And once again, wouldn't mind hearing vocals on this. Good stuff!
#8
Cool, Fun guitar tone. Not the typical metal one. OH break down to spooky arpeggios . It sounds very in style but not very original. It is well produced though.

OH all them instruments came in at around 1 minute. Cool we can see a chorus thing working , singing about something love or hopeless or what have you.

Yea nice texture at 1:45 not too metal not too rock, a nice in between. Then break it down to the spooks again. We could use more bass at the breakdown, a nice full bass sound could REALLY make that arp section spooky and fun. GJ be proud

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