#1
My second attempt at this. :/

I need your opinions on whether this works at all, or if I'd be better off with powerchords on the rhythm guitar, rather than the octave riff thing I've got going right now.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/23237150/His%20World%20Muh.mp3

^If that URL is borked, it's cause I don't know how to use Dropbox right. If so, I'll youtube it. :P

(also, I know the ending bit is horrible. I can't get it right. >:O)

C4C, of course. ^__^
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Last edited by Dark Raven X at Mar 23, 2011,
#2
there isn't really any energy in it.

just play the normal 5ths. sometimes you need that layer of guitars there to give a song its power and it really is lacking it right now. some strong big double tracked 5ths should fix it up.