#1
I wake up finding myself walking on an empty path
I do not know where I go but it feels right
I keep on walking

I see a bitter coldness surrounding me in a touch of loneliness
I feel the moon and the stars guiding me in a dawn of darkness
I do not no where I go but it feels right
I keep on walking

Where ever I went I could not see you
Where ever I will go I will not feel you
You are gone gone to a place I can not follow
Not yet
#2
Your words are very deep but the last verse confused me. I also have trouble linking your title with the rest of the work. Your words are very descriptive which is a plus and the line that says "I keep on walking" really stands out, as it should. All in all great work but it needs to be elaborated more
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