Really enjoyed this track, I think it could be tighter in places, but it really reminds me of a more metal don cab, or a slowed down chon. maybe cut down on the gain the slightest bit on the rhythm guitars. I think there are places where the drums could be double timed, and there are some places where the drums could flow a little better, the tom section near the start feels a bit stop-start.

good track overall though, pretty listenable, and a few minor improvements and more attention to the mixing, and that could make it onto my ipod :-)
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