#2
love the intro already, I think this would be a great song if you added in the vocals, sounds like a really fun song, I'd really like to see the completed version
#3
Thought it got a bit repetitive, but it's pretty good. Theres a guitar in the background doing bends? I thought that should be brought up a bit. Love the bridge? part at 1.54 to 2.25 - it seemed like it had some random noises. This seems like a great song that could get people up and dancing
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