#1
ottomans and auto men
crank the bolts till they strip
the oil pan they share
their t.v sets have rabbit ears
but dont suck any channels in
so they take old tires
put em on ford rangers
and hope to hell they blow
the business is needed
and politics are messy
when the world has control
over each of their simplisitic
god given destinys

i'm a poly sci major, and have been reading on middle eastern affairs, hence the subject matter in my recent posts.
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i suppose there's a chance
i'm just a litte too shallow to consider
that maybe i've been a little more eager
each day to wake up and take a shower
brush my teeth and smile for the mirror
#2
I can't really think of much to crit, as this is out of my style.

You knew exactly how to say what you wanted, and that comes across well.
"their tv sets" through "hell they blow" are my favorite lines. Just clever ways getting your point across.
Good job though. At first I was like confused...why is he comparing footrests and auto mechanics?

And if you'd like to crit back, Cabezon is on the front page or there's this:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1372853
#3
I didn't think the flow was tight enough for there to be no punctuation. I like it otherwise.
There's only one thing we can do to thwart the plot of these albino shape-shifting lizard BITCHES!