#1
“Better seen
from this side of the fence,”
he would always say
and I wanted to point to the chain-link behind us
and to all the fences behind them
but he looked so certain.

I let it go;
set the gears of a lifetime turning.

Now he sits in rooms
of glass and drywall and brick
and there’s a fence outside,
but what keeps me awake
into the most vicious hours of the morning
is the barricade of apathy he’s constructed for himself,
tucked away behind years of promise.

I can only hope
that Twain was right and in three short years
I’ll circumvent the perimeter
and find the gate and we’ll sit
and I can listen to wisdom
for as long as the rain lasts.
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"Art is always and everywhere the secret confession, and at the same time the immortal movement of its time."


#2
How has no one commented on this yet? It's fantastic.


Seriously, great job. Keep writing, I'd love to see more.
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#4
Incredible.

I honestly stayed away from UG for the longest time because I thought everyone's pieces were horrid, but I've read five pieces this week that have made me eat crow.

Fantastic work.
Poor advice.