#2
The arrangement as a whole is quite good; it wasn't overly flashy and the deviations from the main hook complemented well. Only piece of constructive criticism I can offer is that it sounds like you only fleshed out the piece over the last few days or week or so. There's a little tentativeness when you start out, and certain points of emphasis come off thin right at the beginning. I'd just recommend playing around with it till the full continuity is there - you might be really surprised in the difference in this recording and one you do a couple weeks from now.

Overall, nice job man.
Eh.
#5
thanx guys great comments! yeh it was written pretty fast lol

emm... andy mckee is a huge influence! but also people like antoine dufour, don ross nd well a crap load more lol.

i'll check ur guys stuff out as well