#1
Hey, just wrote and recorded a new song. Tell me what you think and i'd be glad to give a listen to and thoughtfully crit your song!

The song is called "Stranger Danger (There's Cancer In Candy Cigarettes)" and it is in my profile. It is an acoustic folk type song, i double tracked the vocals for a chorus effect.

Cheers, and thank you!
#2
i listened to your song and it wasn't bad, but i felt like you need to focus a little more on your voice following the melody of the guitar and also it probably wouldn't have hurt to turn down the vocals a bit because they were very very punchy. I really like the voice double tracking, it always ads a nice dynamic to your voice. the lyrics were cool "strangers want to kill me"
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