#2
Hi there! I can hear you're just starting to play guitar and sing at the same time, I would suggest more practices at this because there's some parts the guitar is off time but well that aside you want some critic in vocals... there's a lot of part where vocals are out of tune man you need to practices there, of course you sound good overall, but in those parts the song breaks... you need to get you best vocals when recording so I recommend using a recording software and hear your stuff a lot, that way you can hear the parts you need to practice or get better at... anyway, keep up the hard work and you'll get it man.

c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1417066
I'll recommend "Memories Never Die", I think you'll like that song
thanks!
#3
Thanks man! I've been told that if I sing less forceful, more mid-level, then I sound better.