#1
Hey guys! Im new to this forum thing but anyways ive been writing some lyrics for a song that me and my band are about to record. Im not the singer though *phew*
But since i came up with the song i took the liberty of doing the lyrics. So tell me are they any good? Its just the start of the song i haven't completed it yet! Here they are:

Poison corrupts your mind
You cant see, Now your blinded from the truth

Sense slowly drifting away.
Who are you to blame
for whats right or wrong, you cant possibly make up for what you've done.

Thats what i have made up so far and i have some more ideas like :

Act before thought, We are the victims of your crime.
Now we are at your door While you search for control.

Tell me what you think..
Last edited by uberfreddy at Mar 28, 2011,
#2
What genre?

In other words, Sweden! Hell yeah!
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#5
I suppose it could work. It all depends really on the vocalist performing, and the actual song.
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