#2
It was pretty decent. It had some strong guitar sounds and overall good mixing. The breakdown near the end seemed to be a teensy bit sloppy, imo, but the rest was pretty solid. I think you could also throw in a few guitar licks or even a solo in there. And I think a vocalist would help the song dynamically.

If you enjoy an alt/rock, classic/rock, bluesy type of genre, I encourage you to check out my sister's boyfriend's band. They're called Andre And The Giants. http://artists.ultimate-guitar.com/aandthegs/ If you're not really into that genre, then you don't have to click the link, but if you are into that sorta thing, please check them out. If you like what you hear, be sure to like them on facebook.

http://www.facebook.com/pages/Andre-and-the-Giants/118700898146364

Thanks for your time, bro. Keep up the good work.

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Play until she breaks up with you.

The most brutal band to ever exist is...

You should go like them...even if you don't like them.


-Sloppyjoe24
#5
Hi there!

thanks for your comments!
Good riffs man! really heavy stuff!! I would work more on the drum tracks to get the track at its full power, the guitar tone its really good, I can't really hear a bass... its just guitar and drums right?... maybe put some bass in there too, bring the drums up a little, vocals should help a lot in this since there's no melody it turns the track pretty plain, anyway keep it up! you're getting there man!
#7
Quote by Vilbel
Hi there!

thanks for your comments!
Good riffs man! really heavy stuff!! I would work more on the drum tracks to get the track at its full power, the guitar tone its really good, I can't really hear a bass... its just guitar and drums right?... maybe put some bass in there too, bring the drums up a little, vocals should help a lot in this since there's no melody it turns the track pretty plain, anyway keep it up! you're getting there man!


Thanks Yeah it's just guitar and drums, which are always my problem, I make them using Ezdrummer, that's why they sound crappy, though my friend has Superior Drummer so I'll import my drums into it and they should sound better. Lack of bass is also a problem Unfortunately I've got no bass guitar, no one who could record it and making bass with computer is pain, so for now it will stay as it is, but with vocal it shouldn't be so bad, at least I hope so


Quote by BrandonBeaux
Dude, nice music! If you weren't all the way in Poland I'd totally front your band.


Thanks Actually there's no band only me, but it would be great to have one
#9
Quote by f8ta1ity54
bad ass!


Thanks I checked your yt channel and I must say great work, you definitely know how to make music
#10
I listened to this a couple days ago or so (from what I can remember) and thought it was so awesome.

Love the in-your-face feel it throws at you.
Really looking forward to hearing this with some strong and powerful vocals.
Great playing and love that tone.

Crit for crit?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1427395
#12
Quote by aaron aardvark
Michael87,
Guitar riffs & tone are excellent! Most of the playing is tight, except for a few parts here & there. Not sure if you have electric bass & it's just following the guitar or ? You're off to a good start! Good luck finding a singer! Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1426734


Thanks
#13
Quote by Michael87
Thanks I checked your yt channel and I must say great work, you definitely know how to make music



thanks man!
#16
Quote by crazycory94
dang dude that was pretty awesome! i love that tone! i am still currently searching for a good metal tone on the pod. sounded great!

c4c?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Pfor-fyVe4&feature=mfu_in_order&list=UL



Quote by Coheed777
Liked the riffs a lot and the palm muting part in the end.
I would change up the drums a good bit, they felt lacking, other than that though it was quite enjoyable.


If you have any time for mine, thanks.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1428507


Thanks, I'll check your stuff and yeah I'm not the best in making drums, though they could always be worse