#1
Very Cannibal Corpse esque, I realize this after I have finished writing. Sort of a spur of the moment thing. I don't see myself writing anything else like this. Imagine an Obituary like track behind it.

Suicide
Ripping into flesh, skin tears from my wrists, cries of pain fill the air.
Blood spurts, hands claw, grasping for life.
No regrets, I welcome Hell. Satan beckons me to his domain.
Suicide
Suicide
The only way out
Cursed to living damnation
Suicide
Instrument of death and destruction, fills my mouth
Laughing as I pull the trigger
Silence breaks, skull cracks, brains fly, plaster the wall.
Mutilated corpse, no autopsy.
Suicide
Suicide
The only way out
Cursed to living damnation
Suicide
No regrets, **** them all. I’ll see you in Hell.
Regin Smiður
#5
Not bad. Can I suggest that you pick a different song title? Not that like "oh no, that's too edgy" or something, just that a song title like that has been done to death. (no pun intended)

That is, if you plan on making it a song or something, but of course it's totally up to you.

EDIT: I tried reading it in Godfried's voice. It was awesome.
Yeah, uh-huh...that's what they all say.