I've never heard the original so i can't compare to that, but this sounded pretty good to me. Obviously production is an issue as it was recorded straight from a webcam or whatever but the song was good. Your voice seems maybe a little dull, but otherwise pretty good. Guitar playing was awesome too if not a little repetitive, try mixing things up a bit more with dynamics and speed, etc. But i did like the laid back feel throughout the track. I love the sound of 12 strings, the quality of the video kinda took most of that special sound away but it was still nice.

So overall i would say the only major problem is production. Good job on the song and thanks for critting my track also

Wow really good playing. You seemed like you were bored playing it though, but everyone shows their passion/excitement/emotion differently I guess.