#2
I've never heard the original so i can't compare to that, but this sounded pretty good to me. Obviously production is an issue as it was recorded straight from a webcam or whatever but the song was good. Your voice seems maybe a little dull, but otherwise pretty good. Guitar playing was awesome too if not a little repetitive, try mixing things up a bit more with dynamics and speed, etc. But i did like the laid back feel throughout the track. I love the sound of 12 strings, the quality of the video kinda took most of that special sound away but it was still nice.

So overall i would say the only major problem is production. Good job on the song and thanks for critting my track also

-Jim
#3
Wow really good playing. You seemed like you were bored playing it though, but everyone shows their passion/excitement/emotion differently I guess.