Christopher S
Registered User
Join date: Oct 2010
880 IQ
#1
Yo guys!

Working on this tune, not really sure where it's heading yet, so I'm gonna upload it here to see what you guys think. It's sorta based on dual harmonies, lots of snares, and catchy riffs.

Constructive feedback appreciated.

So.... how to continue/better what's already there?
Attachments:
#1 Intro Trans Verse.gp5
Last edited by Christopher S at Mar 29, 2011,
Erra93
erriuyai
Join date: Nov 2009
1,682 IQ
#2
In bar 18, to me, it would make more sense to have the first note be a chord (a 4-4-4 chord, that is), to make the transition seem less sudden.
Also, in my opinion, the drums should come in on bar 20 instead of 21. Still, the way it is right now is sort of unexpected, which can be both good or bad :p

And on bar 25 and 29, the first chord could be changed to 2-2-2, it adds more variation and I think it sounds more powerful

It sounds like post-hardcore with some form of egyptian/egyptian-like scale, it's a solid song

I'm sorry I couldn't do better, but would you mind critting my interlude + song in my signature? :p