#8
Quote by InTheFlesh!
well aside from the notes at 0:12 being incorrect, and the tuning not being quite spot on, the sound is mostly good.. you have some awkward fingerings throughout that I'd probably change too. wider vibrato would aid you as well.

c4c?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1426536



One thing I forgot to mention is that the intonation on my high E string is about a half step flat, so that's why the note sounds wrong.