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I saw a wolf with flowers
A thief in the night with powers
Quiet like injustice and shame
One eye dark like royalty
The other dark blue like showers
Teeth sharp and forgiving
His eyes vengeful and perceiving
He told me the hour has come
So why are you sleeping?

I woke up in a daze
A rose on my chest and a stabbing pain
Teeth marks on my heart and bleeding slowly
Wipe the blood, kiss the rose on me
Oh, no just another dream
Things aren't always what they seem

It was a warm night with potential for rain
The heavy hush of baited breath
Listening for the weighted steps
The silky tones were less vivid
Cold sweat running down my face
My hands laced together, tight

Maybe I can chase my mind off
What I see before my eyes
She disappeared right next to me
That little girl just turned to smoke
And faded with a warm smile
Lights flashing in the sky
Little children disappearing
And gods crashing into buildings
What the hell is happening?
Is this the return of Christ
Or just another scary night?

Then I saw the wolf with flowers
A thief in the night with powers
One eye dark like royalty
The other dark blue like showers
Can't you hear the wolf breathing?

Something seems wrong with this poem of mine but I can't pinpoint it.
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Quote by HowIshotguitar?
This is awesome! I absolutely i adore it!

Thanks for the input! Honestly when I first finished this poem I hated it.