#2
It's okay, but your timing is pretty sloppy (all three of you) and the off-key vocals are kind of off-putting. The main problem, though, is that because of the name, it will be automatically compared to Sonic Youth's Teenage Riot, and that's a comparison that nobody ever seems to come out ahead on. You need to get the timing clean and maybe in future refrain from using the names of existing songs.
#3
Quote by AeolianSeventh
It's okay, but your timing is pretty sloppy (all three of you) and the off-key vocals are kind of off-putting. The main problem, though, is that because of the name, it will be automatically compared to Sonic Youth's Teenage Riot, and that's a comparison that nobody ever seems to come out ahead on. You need to get the timing clean and maybe in future refrain from using the names of existing songs.

Not to mention the Ataris song of the same name and the band called Atari Teenage Riot.. it's all a big mess really.
But aye i can't say much more than the post above already did, just keep practicing to get it tighter, it's not bad for pop punk.
Originally Posted by Chromeproguitar
they make horrible noises in the middle of the night (is it sex?)

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I guess she's pretty hot if you're into that "having a good music video, but not better than Beyonce's" kind of thing...