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#1
I have a book idea, but i want to see what other people think of it.

the extraordinarily short summary is that a Military man crashes on a tropical island with his men and is brought to a man who says he is God and they are in Heaven. but later find out that he is the Devil. He escapes into the jungle and finds another man with his people and kill the Devil.
#2
Then the main guys dies or something?
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#4
Sounds like Lost.
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#6
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#7
So your book is going to be what, five, maybe six pages long?
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#10
Actually it sounds like Lord of the Flies but thats more symbolic. Your idea just seems like your just throwing it right out there so any idiot can pick it up
"[Bleach] is mostly water, and we are mostly water, therefore we are bleach"

I feel we should go to...

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#11
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I'm going to steal your book idea and make millions.


I will be your agent for 10%....

First things first, I will "take care" of TS so he can't claim you stole his idea....

Anyone else think it wasn't his idea???
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#12
Oh, and given the structure and grammar of your post, I'd hire a good editor.
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#13
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I will be your agent for 10%....

First things first, I will "take care" of TS so he can't claim you stole his idea....

Anyone else think it wasn't his idea???

I do.
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#14
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I do.


Hmmm... come try on these lovely cement shoes I just made >_>
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#15
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Hmmm... come try on these lovely cement shoes I just made >_>

I already got a pair.
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#16
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Oh, and given the structure and grammar of your post, I'd hire a good editor.

That's what spell check is for silly.
For Frodo!
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#17
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That's what spell check is for silly.


Spell check is awful. Mine suggested I write ' so that the character was bitterer towards his job' rather than 'so that the character was more bitter towards his job'. It made me cry a little.
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#18
I work in publishing and if you can't make it sell, no publisher will print your book.

I don't think that would sell. Mainly because it's a shit idea.
#19
There'll be guns and everything will be like "pew pew" and blood everywhere and it'll be like the matrix an whenever someone wants guns they'll be like "aw man I need guns" and then guns will come from nowhere and then they'll shoot the devil and he'll be like "aww hell no" because the devil will be like Will Smith and stuff and then they can conquer hell and they'll be like "everyone in hell can go free" and suddenly everyone goes back to Earth and then you can write a sequel.

amidoinitrite TS?
#20
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I work in publishing and if you can't make it sell, no publisher will print your book.

I don't think that would sell. Mainly because it's a shit idea.


I'm enjoying the 'lull them into a false sense of security by explaining the situation, and then call them shit' approach.
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#21
Keanu Reeves could be lead!
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#22
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I'm enjoying the 'lull them into a false sense of security by explaining the situation, and then call them shit' approach.


Thanks
#23
You should have a twist at the end that he is actually God and he's dreaming about being a mortal who meets God and the Devil, but in reality God is trapped in a dream world created in his mind by the Devil who was created by Gods imagination in the first place.


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#24
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You should have a twist at the end that he is actually God and he's dreaming about being a mortal who meets God and the Devil, but in reality God is trapped in a dream world created in his mind by the Devil who was created by Gods imagination in the first place.

*BWWWWAHHHHHHHHHH*


Holy shit...
"[Bleach] is mostly water, and we are mostly water, therefore we are bleach"

I feel we should go to...

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#25
Pft. **** religion.
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the chinese take-out place my family always ordered from gave you chopsticks, so as a kid it was fun to try & eat with chopsticks
now i just use a fork, 'cuz nothing is fun anymore & i just want to shovel food into my mouth to fill the void
#26
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Spell check is awful. Mine suggested I write ' so that the character was bitterer towards his job' rather than 'so that the character was more bitter towards his job'. It made me cry a little.
I was kidding, spellcheck hates the way I phrase things.

TS, develop the idea quite a bit more. You're writing an entire novel, the idea better be your absolute best or you'll lose steam 15 pages into it.
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#27
That is a totally shit story. But here's a better idea. When you make that book, why don't you go ahead and smack yourself in the face with it until you realise that you're never going to amount to anything? Addaboy.
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I'm gonna have a really hard time if we're both cannibals and racists.

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That is a totally shit story. But here's a better idea. When you make that book, why don't you go ahead and smack yourself in the face with it until you realise that you're never going to amount to anything? Addaboy.


Tut tut.

You are about as welcome in this thread as a walrus at a dinner party.
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the chinese take-out place my family always ordered from gave you chopsticks, so as a kid it was fun to try & eat with chopsticks
now i just use a fork, 'cuz nothing is fun anymore & i just want to shovel food into my mouth to fill the void
#29
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Tut tut.

You are about as welcome in this thread as a walrus at a dinner party.


Padge is always welcome. Anything to keep him off the street, don't want the little tyke being exposed to 'chavs' and 'tracky bottoms' now, do we?
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#30
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Padge is always welcome. Anything to keep him off the street, don't want the little tyke being exposed to 'chavs' and 'tracky bottoms' now, do we?

I do!
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You have no idea how much I don't want to tell stories about my mother's vaginal slime on the internet.


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#31
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I do!


Then you, sir, may kiss the bride.
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#32
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Then you, sir, may kiss the bride.

NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!

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To be vulnerable is needed most of all, if you intend to truly fall apart.


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You have no idea how much I don't want to tell stories about my mother's vaginal slime on the internet.


I make music sometimes.
#33
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I do!

I'll shit on your door step! Or I could just drop the story idea at your door step, it's equally as shit.
They made me do push ups in drag

I'm gonna have a really hard time if we're both cannibals and racists.

Don't dress as a whore, he'll thump you.

I'm a firework, primed to go off
#34
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I'll shit on your door step! Or I could just drop the story idea at your door step, it's equally as shit.

I have no stoop in front of my house or steps.
To be vulnerable is needed most of all, if you intend to truly fall apart.


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You have no idea how much I don't want to tell stories about my mother's vaginal slime on the internet.


I make music sometimes.
#35
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I have no stoop in front of my house or steps.

You make me sick
They made me do push ups in drag

I'm gonna have a really hard time if we're both cannibals and racists.

Don't dress as a whore, he'll thump you.

I'm a firework, primed to go off
#36
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You make me sick

Don't puke on me.
To be vulnerable is needed most of all, if you intend to truly fall apart.


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You have no idea how much I don't want to tell stories about my mother's vaginal slime on the internet.


I make music sometimes.
#37
smokin' de herb?

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#38
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smokin' de herb?


Smokin' derp.
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the chinese take-out place my family always ordered from gave you chopsticks, so as a kid it was fun to try & eat with chopsticks
now i just use a fork, 'cuz nothing is fun anymore & i just want to shovel food into my mouth to fill the void
#39
It sounds lame, but I've read books about ****ing nothing, and loved them.
Though I'm going to veto this just because based on this one post, you seem like a dude with piss poor English and dull voice.
#40
nb4 someone posts a book with the exact same plot from the 50s or something.
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