A little bit rough around the edges. Not bad, but some of the picking parts are too disjointed, there's away to play them without so much lifting.

Also a few bad strings in those awkward chords, but that's understandable. The pick tapping at the end wasn't really necessary. Maybe if you just lightly palmed the body of the guitar instead that would sound better.

Not bad, just needs some sanding down Great choice for a song.