#3
Is there anything I could fix about "Sailor Song"? I know it's not as catchy, fersure.

EDIT:
And thanks for the crit.
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#4
u_n,
I like a certain amount of weirdness, but "Sailor Song" is a bit too bizarre for me. I guess my biggest gripe is the verse vocal melody. The 60-ish guitar stuff is good though.
#5
Ohkay, thanks. I suck at writing melodies, so that was the best I came up with. I'll work on keeping a certain amount of normality (word?) for the rest of the demo, but I like that song, so it's staying.

Again, thanks for the crit, man. I appreciate it.
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#6
u_n,
You have a sense of humor, so I'll ask. You may just laugh at me. I'm always curious where people are replying from. My pseudo-psychic abilities tell me you live in the USA, I'm guessing somewhere in California. If not USA, what country? If USA, what state (and don't say confusion)? I won't ask what city.
#7
USA, but Mid-West actually.
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#8
*bump*
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#10
Nostalgia had a few nice melodic idea's. nice reverb and feeling in the early calm part feeling, like the uptempo at the end too.

Sailor Song was a nice track too, but it was a little to wierd for my taste and the vocals got lost in the mix.

Both tracks was a little too muddy too but it was alright anyway. Rock on dude!

c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1429093
#11
Thanks guys. I'll crit your tracks now. (Sorry for the slow response, I had a busy few days.)
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