#1
Hello,
Another lyrical composition of mine, nothing more to say about that. Enjoy!
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Oh autumn leaves, oh autumn leaves
Pour your sweet nectar down my sleeves
Cement your beauty on my hand
Oh autumn leaves, all through the land

And let the purity flow through your veins
And gracefully fall from the wooden face
Fall into my hands, fall in steady rains
Fall into my hands, and you’ll find your place

Oh autumn leaves, oh autumn leaves
Fall into my life if you please
Burn your imprint onto my eyes
Oh autumn leaves, too right for lies

And stay forever, locked into my mind
Oh autumn leaves, burn yourself into me
And realize that your being is so kind
The best of nature that there is to see
Oh autumn leaves, please come to me

Oh autumn leaves, oh autumn leaves
Oh please grace me by any means
And my world used to be so gray
But autumn leaves keep hate away

So keep flowing and falling with the rain
Autumn leaves, you have control over me
Blinding me from all other kinds of pain
Beautiful colors are all that I see
Oh autumn leaves, please come to me
Oh autumn leaves, please come to me
I'm just like the Jonas Brothers,

I'm no longer relevant and write mediocre music.


#2
See if Disney wants to buy it, not bad.
Quote by laid-to-waste
look nigga, if you're chillin with 5 bros and 2 hos, you're gonna wanna pay attention to all of em equally. not moon over the hos forever and laugh at every shitty thing they say and just stare at them all night, like some of my mates do.
#3
Quote by treborillusion
See if Disney wants to buy it, not bad.

Is that a compliment? Lol
I'm just like the Jonas Brothers,

I'm no longer relevant and write mediocre music.


#4
Yes
Quote by laid-to-waste
look nigga, if you're chillin with 5 bros and 2 hos, you're gonna wanna pay attention to all of em equally. not moon over the hos forever and laugh at every shitty thing they say and just stare at them all night, like some of my mates do.
#5
Quote by treborillusion
See if Disney wants to buy it, not bad.
I'm giving you an open warning right now: stop spamming shitty critiques like that or I will ban you.