#1
By full on, I mean that it's not just a guitar based solo ish song, a proper instrumental.


But here's the sucky part, my recording gear sucks at the moment so I was getting a lot of lag.

This leads to two things, first is the song being out of time at some points and the second is really really bad tone, I'm sorry!


But please critique on the composition of the song and not recording issues. I know it could have been mixed a lot better too, but this is just a demo. I want to know what you guys think about the song it self, themes, motifs and etc.


Here is the song:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VHCOMTEH0TI


Thank you! <3
#2
Wow. I really like this. I was a tad thrown off by the title. I totally expected some classical music. Regardless, the only real comment I have is in regards to the drums. At a couple points it sounds like some fast cymbal tapping. I don't really like it. It's almost annoying. Other than that, it's an extremely good song.
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#3
I'm bumping this, I've critiqued a few and no one seems to crit me back

^Thank you kindly =)