I've been working on this song for the past week or so. I like most of it, although some parts are kind of ew. Its kind of repetitive and I'm thinking of taking out the overdrive guitar, it just doesn't fit too well in my opinion, but I'll let you guys tell me what you think. Anyways, just tell me what you guys think I should improve on and what parts you like.

Critic for critic as always.
Last edited by Joshua1207 at Feb 19, 2012,