#1
I never used to laugh
until the day I made you smile
then I knew my soul was sold
to that devil in your eye
that made me see the lights
that didn't blind

Then lust turned to love
and love began to hate
what it became,
an obession that berates
the man I strive to create
but I can't stop staring
at all the pretty lights


comments/criticism welcome
#2
It's good. It's really short, but it's still able to capture so much. It's not the most well written thing I've read, but something about it makes it so... enjoyable.
I'm just like the Jonas Brothers,

I'm no longer relevant and write mediocre music.