#2
This is pretty great, I think it's unique and creative too. So major props for that

As far as critiquing it goes, I feel like it isn't cohesive enough. There isn't enough flow, it feels too much like various themes lumped together. I also feel like the jazz tone is a bit too ear piercing at points, maybe warm it up a bit? Or maybe that's just me :p Good stuff though!


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#3
1st off Reminds me alot of a painted in exile style song. Its creative and works very well although like the guy above, there isn't enough flow. Coming out of the jazz section it needs some work it just sounds a bit 'rushed' but really good idea's here man.

Good luck