#3
pretty dirty man you got a great voice. Definitely fits with the song and i'm sure you'd do some great covers of any dispatch tune. Obviously the recording wasn't great - the guitar sounded pretty crappy, but you played it well. I think it would sound better if you threw in some more interest - whether that's a second guitar part, or some solos or something - it was just kinda bland and straightforward. Still, very very good man. Keep it up, and if you have time...

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#4
Thanks man!

Yeh I just recorded me playing it live through garageband with my mac mic. I might try to record it using my 8 track and condenser mic and add some bass and drums and the lead guitar part.

If I get some time I'll definately check yours out.