i like the song writing, vocals, guitar quality is good. That snare is terrible though!! it sounds like someone hammering a nail into some patio furniture!

other than that, sounds really good. nice work!
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Aw yeah! This is pretty heavy, but you definitely need a new snare sound. The lead at 1:36 ish is really catchy I'm diggin' it a lot man, favorite part of the song. I feel like the songs a little on the short side for what it is. I'd say get some more riffs in there and you'll have a very solid song! But yea that lead part is way catchy really stuck in my head.

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