#2
Good stuff, nice rock song. Cool solo, I liked that a lot!

Vocals a bit weak to me, even though they're quite loud, but I think that's just your recording setup. The singing seems to trail off at the end of certain phrases which means they lose their power.

I'd love to hear the song with a higher quality recording, but as it stands, the main danger is that is sounds like a generic rock song. Maybe a break or bridge in the song could take it out of that territory.

C4C please https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1430221
#3
Quote by Cyberbob
Good stuff, nice rock song. Cool solo, I liked that a lot!

Vocals a bit weak to me, even though they're quite loud, but I think that's just your recording setup. The singing seems to trail off at the end of certain phrases which means they lose their power.

I'd love to hear the song with a higher quality recording, but as it stands, the main danger is that is sounds like a generic rock song. Maybe a break or bridge in the song could take it out of that territory.

C4C please https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1430221

Sorry it took so long to reply, I wasn't on the computer! C4C'd.
#4
Quote by Gu1tar K1d
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5rhVuulHkpI

First ever recording, so bear in mind quality isn't going to be studio-worthy. Any feedback appreciated, and will obvious crit for crit. Thank you.

I like your guitar work I can hear a bit of chuck berry sneaking through.

Id suggest the following.

Start the song out with a clean into riff The bassline can then follow your main riff add a fill then cue the drums.

Also I dont like the rythm guitar parts it sounds too much like glam rock for my tastes. Other than that good work, keep at it. The song has potential
#5
Sounds a bit generic to me. The instrumental track sounds pretty good for low quality. I like the glam sort of feel from the rhythm guitar. Lead work was sick. The vocals just aren't powerful. And the vocals seem punk influenced, whilst the instrumental part is more blues oriented. Cool track, just gotta switch something up to make it less generic.

Crit for crit?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1430886