#1
I don't miss the old days
much anymore.
How long has it been?
Ten years? Maybe more?

Since I've felt your touch
Since I've breathed your kiss
since I've heard my name
Cross your lips
Since I left home
since you turned away
since you said your goodbyes
Since you made your escape

You'll find my soul resting on hallowed ground
your secrets safe
these graves don't make a sound.
your lies festered in the wounds that you made
Cut down by your eyes
As you made your escape
#2
I like it. The only line that bugs me is the "your lies festered in the wounds that you made." Seems like it goes from melancholic goodbye sort of tone to REALLY emo right there. "Festered" is pretty strong. But hey, your tune, and all around pretty good job.