great jam there man the intro sounded realy cool but were it comes in where your riffing the heavy part 42secs in i dont think i would carry it into it the riff sounds awsome by its self in my opinion and for me its a little distracting but overall realy dig the song
and thanks for the crit
The intro and the rest of the track don't mix well at all in my opinion. It's like mixing carne asada quesadillas with sushi. Two amazing things, but it doesn't taste well together. Hope that made sense. Make them two separate tracks and it would have a lot more potential. Great playing though.