Krazy Killian
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2008
219 IQ
#1
Right so I posted this in the wrong place so it got moved...to the wrong place. LMAO.

Anyway, I'm writing a musical based on Teen Movies like american pie and that. It was originally american Pie hence the names and lyrics but they will be changed slightly.

Anyway hope you enjoy it, lyrics are on instrument 5.

Would love to know what you guys think of it.
Attachments:
I Have This Friend.gp4
I Have This Friend.gp5
I Have This Friend.mid
Last edited by Krazy Killian at Apr 12, 2011,
Erra93
erriuyai
Join date: Nov 2009
1,682 IQ
#4
The only thing I can say right now is after bar 124 (which seems like a build up to me), something powerful should come, maybe an altered version of the chorus?