#4
Sounds pretty good to me !!

Although i think you lack a little vocal dynamics (how quietly or loudly you should sing) After a while it begins to sound, a little monotonous (this doesn't mean you can't sing)

Having said all this, i enjoyed listening to it and you do have a good singing voice. In my opinion, if you worked on al those stuff i said above, i think it would be even better !!

check out my cover:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1428490

I hope this helps because i,m sick of people just saying: hey you sound good or nice playing man c4c ?? it's just too easy. people won't take the time to try and analise your music. I think that's unfair...

Cheers !!

PS: at 2.21 you missed a note ;-P
#5
Quote by cub0ne
Sounds pretty good to me !!

Although i think you lack a little vocal dynamics (how quietly or loudly you should sing) After a while it begins to sound, a little monotonous (this doesn't mean you can't sing)

Having said all this, i enjoyed listening to it and you do have a good singing voice. In my opinion, if you worked on al those stuff i said above, i think it would be even better !!

check out my cover:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1428490

I hope this helps because i,m sick of people just saying: hey you sound good or nice playing man c4c ?? it's just too easy. people won't take the time to try and analise your music. I think that's unfair...

Cheers !!

PS: at 2.21 you missed a note ;-P


well thanks for the honesty. the song is kinda monotone though in terms of melody. i stayed pretty close to the original melody. i suppose i was singing a little quiet though.
#6
Nice cover.
I especially like the slide solo. It sounds great.
You have a good voice. But as long as you're multitracking, I thought you might as well have added some vocal harmonies on the chorus. It might have helped with the dynamics that cub()ne was talking about.

My main criticism is the sound of the bass part that, I'm guessing, you played on an acoustic guitar. It just sounds really buzzy. Which may or may not be your fault, I'm not sure.

Apart from that, great job.
C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1429143
#7
i liked it man good voice, much softer but that is cool. very in tune. the solo is not technically perfect but i liked it. i think overall it sounds more (rustic?¿?) , like homemade, but in this case it helps it, imo.
#8
well to answer some questions, it is homemade. and i would have loved to put so harmonies but i only have a four track. i suppose i could sing and play on a couple tracks but the way i recorded it this time i wasnt able to.

and yes, its an acoustic bass. im not much of a bass player but im getting better at not making so much fret buzz. its mostly when i come down fast with my pinky. it might need to be set up a bit, strings might be too low.